Monday 28 November 2016

18 Presentation Feeback

When Presenting our presentation to the class about our initial ideas some of the positive feedback we received was that there is a good use of cliff hangers and also a good use of (anti) stereotypes within the product we are going to create. Also quite a lot of the class said they like the look of the plot of our opening sequence and we also have good representations as well as a good target audience.


When looking through the feedback, we received not negative feedback but feedback that will help us improve our opening sequence as they have gave us suggestions towards our product. Some of the feedback we received was that because we have so much action involved they was wondering if we would be able to fit all of the events into our 2 minute opening sequence, I think the class thought of that was because of how we explained things in our presentation. Within the presentation the class suggested we add more detail to the prezi to give the audience more of an idea of what the opening sequence is about for example what props and lighting we are going to use and where the opening sequence will be located.


The class said we successfully used conventions of a thriller film such as with holding the information, we also successfully used stereotypes of a thriller as well as the girls within the opening sequence are represented as weak but throughout the plot it contrasts as the girls become strong and defeat the psychopath.

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